Magazine Advert Draft 1 and Feedback
Positive feedback
- Good choice of background image
- Well done for including logo and iTunes logo
Improvements
- Pull Misterwives down
- Consider font and colour at the bottom of the advert
- Add reviews
- Maybe consider adding a dolls house to it?
Feedback from target audience
- The advert looks empty around the top, try to add in some ratings or reviews
- The happy portrayal of the artists is good and the background shows the pop genre
- Choice of location for main background picture is good
- White font looks basic and unattractive
- Name of the group and album could be a different font to help stand out more on the advert
We will take the feedback we have been given to alter our magazine advert so that it suits are artist image and attracts our target audience. We will do this by changing our colour of font and pulling Misterwives down so that we are portrayed correctly. We will also add an image of the doll's house at the bottom so that there is a link to our music video. This will make sure the audience have a better understanding of how our chosen song and artists link together. Plus, by responding to our audience feedback and changing the colour and style of font and adding more reviews we will be able to attract more of our target audience.
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