Magazine Advert draft 2 and feedback(Ellie Taylor)

Magazine Advert Draft 2

What to improve:

Consider fonts a little more

consider placement

Make the house smaller and put at the bottom of the magazine advert

What went well:

The use of the image

Having the main characters on the the advert

The dolls house linking towards the video and digipak

Feedback from target audience

• The advert does not link well with the video
• Photoshop is a little poor showing very little Photoshop skills. To improve maybe change the location and make it look more edited to resemble a magazine advert. 
• Maybe add the younger character from the video to show the link
• Does not show the narrative that appears in the video
• Have brighter colours and make it stand out more
• Make sure that the genre is clear

With this feedback, we are now going to consider adding the younger versions of the band members to show the link between video and the magazine advert. By changing the location it may be clearer to the audience. from the feedback we are going to make sure that the writing stands out and portrays the genre to the audience. We will change the font and colours as from the feedback we noticed that the genre was not as clear as we would like.