Music video Rough Cut 1
What works well
- Love the idea of the transition between childhood and adulthood
- Good lip syncing
- Lovely editing with the different positions in front of the trees
- Nice amount of content
- I like how goofy it is!
Even better if
- Add more transitions between childhood and adulthood, links to the bracelets
- Add more of finding the doll’s house at the start and the doll’s house throughout the video
- I do not understand why you have a handheld mic in a shed – I think the lip syncing from the shed to be filmed in the recording studio and we need the children lip syncing more as well!
- Link more adult shots to child shots
- Why has one section been recorded and the rest isn’t?
- This needs a little cleaning up and make the narrative a little clearer
Feedback from target audience
- Some parts of the lip syncing are off and need to be adjusted
- The narrative makes sense but more scenes could be added to make it clearer
- The use of different locations makes the video more interesting to watch
- The use of different ages makes the meaning of the music video clearer.
- One section has been recorded and this is ineffective and does not make sense.
- The story line shows the friendship between the girls.
- This music video can be considered as a pop music video because of the different colours and locations.
With this feedback, we can now change and adapt our music
video so that we can make it the best it can be. We will be able to make our
music video have a better narrative by including more of the doll’s house and
more links between adult and child to emphasise that the basic meaning of the
video is about friendship. By following the feedback, we have been given we can
add and change key aspects of our music video so that it is more appealing to our target audience specifically editing the video so that the lip syncing is in the correct place, adding more key scenes to improve our narrative and deleting the recorded section of our music video.
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