Nice variety of shots
Good locations
What could be improved
Lip syncing is slightly out around 1.55 and out again around 3.21
End with the friendship bracelets again
I still want more links to the dolls house to make the narrative clearer - playing with dolls at the start etc
Do not end with your logo - end with a shot that would be memorable - friendship bracelets
Some shots where you are giggling look like its just you guys chilling rather than a music video - something to consider.
Audience Feedback:
From the feedback we are going to make sure that the lip syncing is accurate and that we film more footage of the bracelets so that the audience can understand the link between the younger versions of the band members. We will also add more of the studio singing because there are some scenes in which we are not happy with and look immature as the characters laughing.
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